● What qualifies MOADE Associates as a leading law firm focused on energy
transition? You might want to consider rephrasing this sentence.
● Commercialization (American) to “Commercialisation” (British)
● Instead of “Core Services” use “Services provided cover…”. Overall, “Core Services”
inadvertently references the firm’s Legal Practice Areas.
● Instead of “Industries Served”, consider using “Sub-sectors supported include…”.
Overall “industries” already presuppose the core service area of “Energy and
Natural Resources”.